Friday, June 13, 2014

Read Me

You know, I've often wondered how people would react if I posted something without any general explanation. *waits* I'm gonna do it. I can't help it. *grins*


1746 – The Coast of Virginia

Bonnie frowned at the coming clouds. It's a dreich day. There'll be a storm tonight sure as sure.

She drew her eyes from the Atlantic Ocean with a sigh and reluctantly turned back up the path leading home. It was quickly nearing dinner and Glenna would not be pleased to prepare it all by herself – again. She was far too busy sewing up the girls' new dresses for the party to be bothered with petty things like dinner. But Bonnie couldn't help it. The sea was in her blood, just as it was in her father's; he'd said so. The smell of the salt water sent thrills that she couldn't explain down her spine, and she loved to spend her afternoons looking down at the surf.

“Bonnie! Bonnie!” A cheerful voice called, and a nine-year-old girl raced down the path toward her. Bonnie caught the child deftly in her arms and spun her around.

“Margaret! What are you doing here?”

The girl wiggled excitedly. “Da's home!”

Bonnie's eyebrow went up. “So early?”

Margaret nodded. “Aye, and he sent me to fetch ye straight away!”

Bonnie caught her sister's hand in her own. “Then we'd better be off!”

They walked briskly through the sands together, hands swinging. Margaret sang a marching song from the old country, but Bonnie was too keen on her thoughts to join in. Da never comes home early. What's going on?

When the two girls entered the house, Bonnie led her sister to the kitchen where they were met by a pair of glaring green eyes and a sharp tongue.

“Bonnie Rose Allaway, you've been gone most of the day. And just what sort 'o trouble have ye been into?”

Bonnie tried to hold back a grin and waved a distant hand at her sister. “Glenna, dinnae worry so much.”

Glenna huffed and planted her hands on her hips. The gesture made her appear much older than her thirteen years, and her Scottish blood ran too deeply to allow her to let the remark pass unchecked. But thankfully, any retort she could make was cut off as Irving Allaway entered the kitchen.

“Noo, lasses,” he announced grandly. “I'm off!”

Bonnie stared in surprise at her father. “Off? Where?”

“My ships were blown off-course by a gale, and I jist got news they're going to Charleston.”

“Charleston?”

Margaret scrunched up her brow. “Isn't that in South Carolina?”

“Aye,” Irving snatched a loaf of bread off the table and wrapped it in a kerchief. Without ceremony, he stuffed it into the bag he'd carried in with him. Glenna moaned softly as her freshly-baked loaf vanished, but she said nothing to discourage him.

“This could be the change 'o our fortunes, me bairns,” he continued, raiding the pantry for other edibles to add to the bread. “This will make us rich! Joseph Smith will be sure to take me as partner then, and all our troubles will be over!”

Bonnie's breath caught in her throat. “Really?”

Irving stopped rummaging to embrace her tightly. “Jist think, me Bonnie Rose, we'll have servants and all the fine things yer wee hearts could desire. No more cooking, no more tending the garden, no more work for any 'o us! We'll have more money than you could ever dream of!”

Margaret clapped her hands. “Da, can I get pearls then?”

May I,” Glenna corrected under her breath.

But Irving didn't notice. He picked Margaret up and danced her around until she squealed. “Aye, strings upon strings 'o pearls. I'll bring them back for ye!”

Glenna's jaw dropped. “Bring them back?”

Irving put Margaret down to grab his middle daughter's hands. “I'll bring anything ye want back. Tell me, Glenna, what do ye want?”

Glenna's green eyes narrowed for only a moment, and she looked down. Bonnie knew that her sister was seeing the worn blue dress hidden beneath her cooking apron. Despite all her skill with the needle, Glenna couldn't hide their shameful poverty.

She locked gazes with her father. “A dress. A fine silk or brocade dress. Something I won't be ashamed to wear.”

Irving kissed her loudly on the forehead. “Then ye shall have it, me lass!” Lastly, he turned to Bonnie and grasped her shoulders gently. “And what would ye have me bring ye?”

Bonnie's mind raced. Rarely was her father mistaken about the activity of his ships, few that they were. If the trade he boasted of truly waited for him in Charleston, he could easily bring her back whatever her heart desired. Things like pearls and fine gowns were mere items compared to the riches they were promised. What do I want more than anything else?

A laughing face came to her mind, teasing her so that Bonnie could not push it away. There was no use trying to deny it, for her own soul knew her better than she did. “A rose,” she finally said. “A single, red rose.”
Irving's face softened instantly and he covered her cheek with his hand. “Like yer ma's.”
Bonnie bit her lip. You won't start crying. Not now, not when he's about to leave. “I'd like to plant a garden like hers... to remember her by.”

“Then ye shall have it.” Irving whispered. “By the bounty of God, I am what I am, and I will bring it back to ye.”

He quickly bade his three girls farewell, and all too soon he had saddled his horse and was galloping away. Bonnie stood with her sisters at the door, watching and waving until he was completely out of sight.

“I wish he'd waited until morning to go,” Bonnie said. “He's sure to get caught in the storm.”

“Och, let him be,” Glenna scolded. “If he cannae wait, he cannae wait.” She tugged on her sister's arm, drawing her back into their small house. “Come on, ye get to cook the neeps.”

Bonnie wrinkled her nose at the mention of the vegetable. Turnips were her worst enemy, but she knew she should be grateful for the Lord's provision.

The days passed slowly as Bonnie and her sisters waited for news from their father. Glenna took advantage of his absence to assume temporary command of leadership and ordered Bonnie and Margaret around in a mad cleaning frenzy. Windows were washed, curtains were mended, and everyone choked on the dust Glenna stirred up with her broom.

“I won't have him returning to a dirty house,” she told Bonnie more than once. “When we're rich, we'll have servants to clean for us, but I refuse to smell like a barn. If you had more initiative, this would already be done.”

Bonnie gladly surrendered the role over to her younger sister. Even though she had just turned sixteen and was expected to behave like a proper adult, she just couldn't seem to reconcile herself to that fact. It was so much easier to escape to the coast and dream with the sand between her toes. Margaret joined her on a few occasions, but usually the retreat found only Bonnie alone gazing at the waves.

She'd dream about her father returning just as he said, wondering what would happen to them, how they would fit into fine society when the foreign trade giant Mr. Smith accepted Irving Allaway as his partner. Most of the time, though, she thought of her mother and the old country. Moving to America after Aisla Allaway's death had not been easy for any of them, but Bonnie knew their prospects were better here in Virginia than they had been in Scotland.

It was a week since Irving's departure when Glenna rushed into the house, waving a letter clenched tightly in her fist. “It's from Da!”

As the oldest, they all agreed Bonnie had the most right to open it and read it aloud. With trembling fingers, she did so, the sight of her father's familiar scrawling hand bringing tears to her eyes. He had yet to reach Charleston, but he spoke in high spirits, echoing his former promises of wealth. Glenna and Margaret sighed with joy at the thought of their gifts, but Bonnie found herself puzzled over a paragraph Irving had written near the close of his letter.

Do not be alarmed for my writing this, but I can scarcely excuse this from the tale of my journey. A few days past, a storm caught me on the road, throwing me about so that I completely lost my way. I'm not sure what I would have done if I had not stumbled upon a hidden drive. Do not ask me how I found it, only God knows. It led to an old mansion, and I thought it deserted. However, I was greeted at the door by two servants. Neither spoke to me, but they took me in, fed me, and gave me a warm bed to sleep in. The next morning, they brought me bangers and eggs for breakfast and prepared my horse for my journey onward. Odd, that they never spoke, but I now deem them both mute. They must live there alone, for I never saw another soul. Unless their master refused to see me. But Bonnie – as I left the mansion, I glimpsed the most wonderful rose garden on the grounds. I wish you could see it. Your ma would have loved it. The roses are the purest red you could imagine.

“What kind of house do ye suppose it was?” Margaret asked when Bonnie had finished.

“A mansion, that's what.” Glenna rolled her eyes.

“No, no – why was it abandoned? Was it haunted?”

“Really, Margaret!”

Bonnie chewed on her cheek. “Why would the master not greet Da?”

“He probably wasn't home,” Glenna said. “The family could have been visiting...” she searched for a viable place but came up empty. “Somewhere.”

Margaret's eyes gleamed with mischief. “Or maybe they'd all been killed off by pirates. Bloody bandits murdering them in the night, beheading them and cutting off their...”

Glenna's mouth dropped open in horror, and Margaret ran screeching from her prying fingers. Bonnie laughed at her sisters' antics, knowing fleet-footed Margaret too much of a match for Glenna to catch. She might have joined in the chase, as unladylike as it was, but the mysterious mansion bothered her. For some unknown reason, she couldn't shake the premonition that grabbed her when she'd first read the letter. That night she tucked the letter safely under her pillow and fell asleep envisioning the rose gardens. Thousands of roses, rich roses, velvet to the touch, each one sweet with the scent of her mother. Yet her dreams turned on her, and she found that every time she bent to pick a bud, it was dripping blood.

God bless!

Thursday, June 12, 2014

June Crusade: Samantha

And this officially starts my third plot bunny for Anne's June Crusade. Click HERE to learn more about this challenge.


I'm sure many (if not all) of you are familiar with the classic American Girl books. We've read their stories, we have some of the dolls (I have Kirsten Larson; how 'bout you? comment!), and we've loved the history behind them. But did you never wonder about what happened to them after their last story? Each girl (of the original set) is introduced, goes to school, has Christmas, turns 10 years old, saves the day, and encounters change. But where does their story go after that? What happens to them? What do they do when they're older?


Now, I told myself I was never EVER writing fanfiction. Imagine -- taking someone else's characters and making them do stuff! But, I don't s'pose most of us can help it. I can't help it. As soon as I read or watch a good story, my mind instantly goes to "What's next?" And then I spend the next week figuring out their future. I've got sequels to Peter Pan, The Borrowers, Epic (2013 film), some of the American Girls, and so many other stories all running amuck up in my brain! Sure, since I have Kirsten, I already have a story planned for her, but for some odd reason, I can't get everything to match up. So, I'm still chewing on that. 

Samantha's was easier to plot, especially of the BIG historic moment that falls right around her eighteenth birthday. What? Can you not know of what I speak? Let's see... Samantha turned 10 in 1904... and then she would have been 18 in 1912, right? The infamous 1912... yes. You know. 

The sinking of the Titanic.

Would Samantha have been aboard that fateful ship? Almost eighteen years old (the Titanic's maiden voyage was in April and Samantha's birthday is in May) and part of a very wealthy family makes me think that... yes, she would have been. That would have been just right around the time that Grandmary would have decided that a European tour was in line for Samantha's education, and April of 1912 would have been the month they returned to New York.

Intriguing, eh? I can't deny that I'm intrigued. 

So, here's what I got for a blurb so far:

For Samantha Parkington, life has always been easy. She's rich, she's beautiful, she's young, she's smart, and even though she's technically an orphan, she couldn't find more happiness than with her aunt, uncle, and adopted sisters, Nellie, Bridget, and Jenny. Life couldn't get better – but she soon discovers it can. Grandmary suggests a trip to Europe to complete her formal education, and Samantha is thrilled at the chance.

In a way, Samantha has always known that she was meant for important things. She's determined to make a difference in the world. Sooner or later, Grandmary will insist that she take a husband, but Samantha's willing to seek out the richest and handsomest man. And while she's at it, why not select one from the glittering and velvet company of the first class passengers of the Titanic? Grandmary could hardly do better.

But who is this Christ people keep talking about? And why do their stories of birth and death affect Nellie so? Samantha thought she had the world figured out, but one cold night throws everything she knew into the deep. It will take tragedy of the greatest kind to show her what's really important in life and what the true meaning of love really is.

Let me know what you think! I don't have a title yet, so I'm just referring to this as the Samantha sequel.

God bless!

Tuesday, June 10, 2014

June Crusade: Le'seur's Bells

Plot bunny #2, folks. And if you have no idea what I'm talking about, you simply must drop by Anne-girl's delightful blog and learn all about the June Crusade. LINK, in case you missed it.


I love this quote!
This one was inspired purely by my budding interest in The Hunchback of Notre Dame. Having just watched the Disney film and loved the story (and especially Alan Menken's score), I determined to read the book. Sure, I knew it was different. I wanted to know how different. Well, peoples, I'm barely a fifth through the novel, and it's very different.

One of the biggest differences is in the main character, the hunchback himself. In the film, Quasimodo is portrayed as a misshapen bell-ringer, and while that's true, Disney tones it down for the kids. Quasimodo is in fact much more hideous, and in addition to being ugly and bent, he's also deaf from ringing the bells. All those huge bells, and the tremendous noise they make... well, that would definitely make someone deaf. Yeah, Disney kinda glossed over that fact.

Then I began thinking about how a deaf person would narrate a story. If he/she had been deaf for as long as he/she could recall, how would they view the world? Without hearing, it would be impossible for them to understand dialogue, so naturally the writer foolish enough to indulge in this plot bunny could not write dialogue from the deaf person's perspective. Interesting, eh? How to write a book with no dialogue? Is it possible?

Now, I'm not entirely sure this story will remain all dialogue-less. Many times I begin a project and it completely turns itself around on me. Just so you all know. But I am determined to see where this goes.

Usually, when a story like this jumps out to me, the story name leaps out along with it. But for this particular story, I'm having a difficult time trying to pinpoint a title. I've been debating with a list of them, and I'm hoping to get some feedback from you, my lovely readers. I'm stuck with Le'seur's Bells for now, but I'm not totally sold on it. I want something that implies the connotation of being deaf, but still speaking. Almost oxymoron-ish. Any thoughts?

Okey dokey, this is my best attempt at a summary:


The Evaristé is undoubtedly the most beautiful building in Cotédor, and perhaps the greatest building in the world. Majestic, ancient, and with a bell tower stretching to the skies, it stands proudly as a symbol of the glory of kings past. Once the Evaristé housed the law courts of Cotédor, royal families and peasants alike flocking the granite steps to hear sentences read on the most desperate criminals.

Bartrid was one criminal whose case was an accident. Convicted of a felony he did not commit, he was acquitted and offered the position of the bell ringer for Evaristé as no one would trust a man branded a criminal. Even when disaster struck and the great building was left to its own ruin, he refused to abandon the only home he knew. Years later, he still remains the bell ringer of the Evaristé, faithfully plying his trade every morning and evening. His only companion is his young grandchild, a girl born beneath the great bells and sorely affected by their song. She is simply called Le'seur – the deaf one.

Le'seur is content to live under the golden splendor of the Evaristé's bells. Being deaf, how could she ever gain friends? What more could she ever want than the joy of being with her grandfather and the bells? When Bartrid's loyalty to Cotédor is attacked, and he is taken into custody, Le'seur will have to clear his name no matter what the cost. And that will mean leaving her beloved bells behind and trusting her safety to strangers. But who can help her? How can one little deaf girl speak the words to change a kingdom and save the life of the only person who ever loved her?

And, just because, how about a bit from the first chapter? I haven't gotten very far yet, but I just couldn't wait to share this with you.

She was strong in body and mind, she was an orphan, and she had the most beautiful smile in Cotédor. Of all of that, Bartrid was certain. But he also knew one thing more about his granddaughter – she was deaf, and the world would not look kindly upon her for it. So he thought on the day she was born, and so he thought twelve years later. But it wasn't her fault; nor did the fault lie with her mother or her father. No, if any could bear the blame it was Bartrid himself. The bells were his, and it was their song that had stolen the sound from his granddaughter's ears. And for that, she was called simply Le'seur – the deaf one.

It must also be pointed out that Bartrid did not have perfect hearing either. His fifty years under the bells of the Evaristé had not gone without consequences. He could hear little, but what was that to him? Le'seur could hear nothing, so it was only natural that he shared in her silence.

But for her silence, Le'seur never made any complaint. She always greeted her grandfather in the morning with a hug and a smile, and her eyes always flashed with the wonder of her surroundings. She did not know what it was she missed, nor did she need to miss it. The work of the bells contented her well enough. And Bartrid was content to let it stay that way. 

God bless!

Saturday, June 7, 2014

CinderEddy Cover Reveal

My good friend Kendra of Knitted By God's Plan is publishing her Cinderella short story soon, and I have the very great pleasure of showing you all her fantastic cover! 

But first... let's show a picture of Kendra herself, so you don't automatically get the new cover on your dashboard.


About Kendra: 
I am, first a foremost, a Christian. I accepted Jesus into my heart when I was three and a half, and have never regretted the decision. I am secondly the eldest daughter (and child for that matter) of a homeschooling family. Third, I am the author of The Bookania Quests. Fourth, I am a knitter/crocheter/aspiring herbalist. I think that sums me up.

And now.... CinderEddy, everyone!


About CinderEddy:
Edward, called CinderEddy by his stepbrothers, has been treated as little more than a servant ever since his mother died after her remarriage. When the Princess Elicia is kidnapped, however, his stepbrothers join the other knights attempting to rescue her, and Edward uses their absence to make his own attempt at her rescue. He doesn't expect to succeed, but somehow, he keeps finding himself on the right path.


And don't forget! Kendra is celebrating five years as a blogger in July and August! Be sure to add her party to your calendar!

God bless!

Thursday, June 5, 2014

The Legend of Dortsa Rosa

Remember that Beyond the Thorns plot bunny I'm working on? Well, I promised you all some snippets, and here ya go! This is the first scene/introduction/legend/chapter/whatever you'd like to call it. Enjoy!




Daleth Gregorick gave a playful scowl to his nephew. “If you don't lay down, Troy, I'm not going to tell the story.”

The little boy instantly stilled. He drew his knees up to his chin and hugged them, as it that would hinder his jumping on the bed again. “I'm sorry. Please tell it!”

“I'm already asleep, Father.” Another voice came from the corner, and Daleth chuckled.

“Do you talk in your sleep, my boy?”

Fort's young brow wrinkled in thought. After a long moment, he said, “Aye. And I listen good, too, so you can go ahead and tell the story.”

With both boys' attention glued on him, Daleth couldn't help himself. He rubbed his chin. “Well, now, I don't know. It is getting late. And you've already heard this story more times than I can count.”

Troy and Fort both lunged for him. “No, no! You promised to tell us!”

Daleth laughed as he wrestled with both boys. He knew he shouldn't get them all excited again, not when it was already past their bedtime, but he loved their tumbles together. Fort was definitely getting stronger, even at nine years of age, and his father was proud to note all the signs of a worthy leader in him. He had a strong command about him that not many boys his age could uphold, and Daleth knew without a doubt that Fort would be the one to lead the Gregorick name back into its former glory. How could one look at Fort and believe otherwise?

Troy, on the other hand, was full of an innocent and childish energy. His bright eyes eagerly looked upon the world and refused to find fault with it. The six year old's curly blond hair never was smoothed down, and he steadfastly followed his cousin into whatever game or mischief Fort could come up with. Troy had been so young when his parents had died, and yet, almost as if to spite his bleak past, he was never bitter about it. He didn't remember much about his mother or father, and Daleth supposed that helped.

“Father! You said you'd tell it tonight!” Fort cried as Daleth's strong arms pushed him back. “You can't back out of your promise!”

“Tell it! Tell it!” Troy chanted, bouncing up and down once more on his own bed.

“All right, all right!” Daleth threw his hands up in surrender as Fort leaped up to tackle him again. “Sit down, both of you.”

Fort relinquished the fight with a satisfied sigh as Troy dropped himself flat on the bed, eyes dancing.

Daleth cleared his throat. “Dortsa Rosa was a princess many years ago. She was the prettiest maiden in the land, and suitors flocked from all over the Twelve Kingdoms for a chance to win her hand. But she never looked at one of them, for you see, her father had already arranged her marriage to a man worthy of her title and heart.”

“Troinlus Gregorick!” Fort announced, not noticing that he was interrupting.

“I'm named after him,” Troy announced innocently.

Fort turned a scowl on his cousin. “No, you're not.”

“Aye, that he is, my son,” Daleth said. “Now, are you two going to tell the story, or are you going to let me do it?”

“Sorry, Uncle!” Troy buried his face into the blankets. “Keep going!”

And so Daleth did. “Troinlus Gregorick was my great-great-great uncle. He was a good man, strong, handsome, clever, and brave. He was friends with every fairy, dwarf, elf, and man in Malarber. There was no obstacle he could not overcome, no problem he could not fix, no song he could not sing.”

Fort puffed up his chest and whispered to Troy, “Just like me!”

“Troinlus loved the princess Dortsa Rosa with all his heart. The king, too, loved Troinlus like a son, and he was so happy to see him engaged to his daughter.”

“Did she love him?”

Daleth, caught off guard, blinked twice. “I'm sorry?”

Troy took a deep breath. “I mean, did the princess love Troinlus? They couldn't get married unless she loved him, too.”

“Well... I'm sure she did. Her father would not have arranged their betrothal unless he knew it would make his daughter happy. She must have loved him very much, for he was ever her only choice for a suitor.” Daleth lowered his eyebrows. “I thought you said you were going to be quiet.”

Troy blushed. “I'll bite my tongue, Uncle.” And following his words, he did just that, crossing his eyes in an attempt to catch a glimpse himself in the act.

Daleth laughed but continued. “But there were many people who did not approve of their marriage, and so a week before the wedding, someone crept into the palace. The guards never saw him, nor was his evil presence ever detected.”

Even though he knew the story, Troy gasped. “Who was it?”

“No one knows to this day who that man was, or even if he was man at all. Some people think it might have been a dwarf, or even a fairy. But they never caught him. And they never suspected that someone would do something so ghastly as he did.”

Fort was also hooked. “What?”

“He poisoned Dortsa Rosa.”

“No!” The two boys breathed at the same time.

“Aye, that he did. One week before the wedding, the king and queen held a magnificent banquet in Troinlus's honor, and the very next morning, they found the princess asleep in her bed.”

“But that was a bad thing,” Troy offered, forgetting his promise to be quiet. “Because she never woke up.”

Daleth gave a sad nod. “Her parents did all they could to wake her. Doctors were called from every corner of Malarber, and some were even summoned from Troisem and Darancia. But no one could wake her. She slept, and she would not be stirred. Weeks passed, months passed, and still the princess slept. Her parents grew old and died, and Troinlus was devastated. He kept her memory alive and never married, always pledging himself true to his betrothed. But he could not last forever, either, and it wasn't long before the good people of Malarber buried Troinlus.”

“And that's when bad luck fell on the Gregoricks.” Fort looked very solemn, but his facial muscles twitched in deep thought.

“Aye, with Dortsa Rosa asleep, Troinlus could not marry her, and thus the family of Gregorick passed into a lesser name. Troinlus's younger brother married and kept the family alive, but their former glory was all lost.”

“And what happened to the princess?” Troy asked in a whisper.

Daleth studied the face of his nephew. “No one ever saw her again. Some say she still sleeps, only to waken after a hundred years have passed. Others believe that she will never waken again.”

The story finished, Fort and Troy settled under their blankets. Daleth gave them each a good-night kiss on their forehead and then left the room. As the door shut behind him, Troy bounded out of bed and raced to keep it open.

“Uncle! Uncle!”

Daleth turned. “What is it, Troy?”

“What does Dortsa Rosa mean? Why do we call her that?”

“It means his flower sleeps. Troinlus gave her that name while she slept to honor her memory, and so she is still called today because no one can remember what her real name was. Now, are you quite finished with questions?”

“Yes, Uncle. G'nite.” Troy shut the door and scuttled back to bed.

No sooner had he jumped onto his pillow then Fort yanked it from beneath him and smacked him in the face with it. With a stifled giggle, Troy snatched his cousin's pillow and counterattacked. The fight only lasted a few moments before Fort had the six year old pinned down on the floor.

“All yours!” Troy gasped. “Get off!”

Fort rolled off with a grin. “Say, do you want to know a secret?”

Troy's eyes gleamed. “What secret?”

The older boy crawled to his bed and reached under the mattress. When he pulled his hand back, he displayed two matching rings to his cousin. They were made from the purest gold, with a thin red thread of metal worked into the circle. On the inner curve was etched something that looked suspiciously like words to Troy's eye, but he wasn't sure what it said. After all, he was only six.

“What're those?”

“Dortsa Rosa and Troinlus's wedding rings. I found them in the treasury.”

Troy gaped. “Are you allowed to go there?”

“No.” Fort grinned proudly. “But Father will never miss them. They're ours now. They'll stand for our pledge.”

“Right.” Troy wasn't sure what a pledge was, but hearing Fort speak of it like that, it must be something awfully important.

Fort grabbed his cousin's hand and placed it on top of his with the rings between their palms. “Dortsa Rosa is real, Troy. I just know it. And it'll be us who find her one day. She may be sleeping, but we're going to wake her up. That is our pledge.”

“Aye!” Troy shouted happily.

As the two of them climbed back into their beds, Troy lay awake for a while, thinking as only a young boy could think. He knew Fort would find the sleeping princess. Fort could do anything he set his mind to. Fort was just like Troinlus, and if he said Dortsa Rosa was sleeping, if he believed that they could find her, then it was all true. Fort would be a hero in all Malarber, and Troy would be his right hand man.


Like Troinlus, there would be nothing they could not do. Not as long as they were together.

~ Beyond the Thorns 
(Copyright of Kiri Liz; please do not steal; thanks)

God bless!

Wednesday, June 4, 2014

June Crusade: Beyond the Thorns

Anne-girl of Scribblings is hosting the third annual June Crusade, and this year's theme (by popular vote) is plot bunnies. I know, right? How intriguing! But I already have so much planned for this month, and so I told myself I simply wasn't allowed to join. 

Haha. My Little Writer is mocking me now. 

Who can resist a good plot bunny? And I've got so many bouncing on my brain that it's almost impossible to ignore them. So, I'm not. I'm officially linking up with Anne-girl's crusade, and this here, peoples, is my first plot bunny.


Beyond the Thorns (working title)

The tale of Sleeping Beauty is... well, honestly, not my favorite fairy story. I mean, seriously, a heroine who sleeps for the entire story and a hero whose only brave act is to kiss her? Nope. Not sold. And some of the original tales are far worse (please don't ask how; just believe me). The Disney animated version boosted the tale a little in my estimation, but only to a certain degree. I thought Aurora a sweet princess, and I loved the music (duh, it's Tchaikovsky... everyone loves his ballets). But I still believed the tale to be really dumb. Prince Philip is nice, but he barely speaks. He doesn't even grunt or groan during his "big" fight with the dragon! Unrealistic? Yes, ma'am. 

But I couldn't push Sleeping Beauty away forever. No, there was too much potential there. And when I decided that I was going to one day rewrite all the fairy tales without magic, how could I neglect this one? The plot bunny bit me hard, and now I think I've got the real tale of Sleeping Beauty. 

First off, no magic. That takes out evil witches, magic spells, sparkling wands, and all the like. Sorry, folks, you ain't gonna find Maleficent within these pages. Next, the Sleeping Beauty. The girl who sleeps for a hundred years. Yes, it has to be a hundred because that's how the story goes. Wait... how are you going to send a girl to sleep for a hundred years without killing her? Especially without magic? This is where the fantasy aspect comes into play. What if there was a potent herb that had the ability to send people to sleep? An older individual might take a little in tea before they go to bed, and it would give them a refreshed sleep overnight. A slightly larger dose might be given to a highly injured person to bring about a longer sleep to help them recover. If taken abundantly, it has the potential to make a person sleep for... well, a hundred years.

But she's not going to get woken up with a kiss. Ugh. No. I refuse to go there. The herb just wears off, and she wakes up. That's that.

But that's not the end. What about a hero? All good stories need a hero. Well, this one's getting two... cousins. Why not? What role do they play? They have a big part in what happens to the princess after she wakes up. And they have some part in actually waking her up... for reasons. The heroes must have a good reason to wake her. And I've given them one. You'll just have to wait a bit before I tell you.

I s'pose I should post the blurb about it. Here ya go, readers; this is about the best I can do to summarize it:

The Princess Carolinae fell asleep on her eighteenth birthday, and now at last, one hundred years later, it is prophesied that her great slumber will end. But in a hundred years, so many things have changed. All she knew is gone, including her beloved parents and the fiancée she'd never met. A new ruling family has taken over the kingdom she called home, and she finds herself no more than a legend in the eyes of all. The name of the Sleeping Beauty might be famous, but the simple Princess Carolinae is forgotten. The only thing to comfort her are three small fairies, faithful friends who watched her while she slept.

But who sent her to sleep? And why? Rumors of dissension and wars grow daily, and their potency are without equal. Some claim her to be the cause, and many would rather see her sleep for another hundred years. Everywhere people yearn to use her name for their own advantages, lying and doing whatever they might to pull her over to their side. Some would even kill her to glory in their cause.

Waking up only brought her danger, and now Carolinae must learn to adapt to this new world. She is forced to trust two strange cousins who claim to know her rightful place, and although they swear to protect her, she senses betrayal at every corner. So many have lied to her before. Are they only lying to her, too?

Well, what do you think? I will try to post a snippet or two soon!

God bless!

Tuesday, June 3, 2014

"Kids'll Blow Dandelion Fuzz..."

My friend Arwen (of a private but epic blog) began a new blog award: the Olaf Award! She describes it as a blog award dedicated to the glories of Disney animation. Thank you so much for nominating me, Arwen!



Rules:
1.  Answer the award questions.
2.  Pass the award on to however many bloggers you choose, using the same or your own questions.

Arwen's Questions (applying to animated Disney movies):
1.  What is your favorite Disney movie of all time?
Ooh... tough question. Since we're talking animated movies, it'd be either Tangled, Frozen, or Beauty and the Beast

2.  Of the three newest Disney films (Tangled, Brave, and Frozen), which is your favorite?
Probably TangledFrozen is epic, but I've always been partial to long blonde hair. Brave... ugh... let's not even go there.

And this movie is entirely quotable... what's not to like?

3.  Do you tend to prefer Disney films made prior to the 2000s or those made more recently?
Usually, as a general rule, I like the older films. There are a few recent exceptions, but I find older, better. 

4.  Who is your favorite character in Frozen?
Hands down, Olaf. Sidekicks are epic, but Olaf tops every sidekick of all time.

5.  Everyone loves Disney music.  Any movie whose soundtrack you particularly enjoy?  Limit yourself to three.
Hmm... only three?? *le sigh* Let's see... The Little Mermaid, Tangled, and The Hunchback of Notre Dame. Alan Menken did the scores for all three, and I absolutely love them. I enjoy Tangled and HoND films as well, but I cannot endorse the story and characters of LM... for obvious reasons.

"Out There" - one of my absolute favorite songs.

6.  In your opinion (similar to Question #3), has the quality of Disney's film-making decreased as time has gone on, or has it only improved? 
They've bettered their ability to tell a good story, but the themes and music has degraded, IMHO. For example, I love the music of Sleeping Beauty. One of my all-time favorite Disney songs is Once Upon a Dream. Yet, the storyline of the film is... well, to put it kindly - dull and dumb. The prince and princess meet once and fall in love. They have hardly any lines whatsoever in the film. The princess only has 15 minutes of screen time. It's the three fairies that steal the show. Cinderella is also a cute film; beautiful music, gorgeous animation, memorable characters, etc. But the prince is a horrid store-window-dummy. He speaks, what... once?? To contrast with that, The Princess and the Frog is an atrocious film. While the story makes complete sense and has a believable plot, it's full of witchcraft and pop songs that I can't even listen to. Brave is a cool story about a girl with wild hair and a horse and a bow. Patrick Doyle did an awesome job on the soundtrack, and I love the Scottish themes. But it also is full of witchcraft and there's an unfortunate amount of... *cough* shall we say people losing their clothes or not having clothes in the right spot? 

7.  Favorite Disney couple? 
Hmm... probably Eugene and Rapunzel. Even though they only know each other for a couple days, their relationship is sweet and believable. Eugene embodies the true meaning of love when he sacrifices himself for Rapunzel. And she's got a quirky personality and awesome hair. What's not to like?

8.  Favorite Disney sidekick?
Olaf. Second only to Pascal. And then Maximus. And Lumiere. And Sven. And Mushu. And Jaq Jaq. And Cogsworth.

"I'm gonna tell him."

9.  What is the worst Disney film you've ever seen?
I've seen plenty of worst, but one particularly awful one was The Black Cauldron. I really enjoyed reading Lloyd Alexander's novel, but the film was a horrible adaption. It had the potential for an epic story, but Disney did so many things wrong. The Little Mermaid is downright bad, too.

10.  Lastly, what is one lesser-known Disney film you'd recommend?
Well... probably The Great Mouse Detective. It's a fun Sherlock parody. 



Okey dokey... ready for my nominees? I'm only going to do a few so we don't get an epic outbreak of Olafs on the internet (however, that wouldn't totally be a bad thing).

Jessa Bri
Melody
Lauriloth
Eva

Questions for you:
1.  What is your favorite Disney movie of all time?
2.  Of the three newest Disney films (Tangled, Brave, and Frozen), which is your favorite?
3.  Do you tend to prefer Disney films made prior to the 2000s or those made more recently?
4.  Who is your favorite character in Frozen?
5.  Everyone loves Disney music.  Any movie whose soundtrack you particularly enjoy?  Limit yourself to three.
6.  In your opinion (similar to Question #3), has the quality of Disney's film-making decreased as time has gone on, or has it only improved? 
7.  Favorite Disney couple? 
8.  Favorite Disney sidekick?
9.  What is the worst Disney film you've ever seen?
10.  Lastly, what is one lesser-known Disney film you'd recommend?

God bless!