This snippet is from a story of mine that's still kinda in the works. Doesn't have all the kinks ironed out yet. But I am so insanely excited to write this book, and when I saw what Melody had posted for this month's inspiration for QQ (picture below), my thoughts immediately turned to this story. For those who are interested, it's called The David Team, but any more information will have to be found via this link.
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I
rubbed my hand across the gun slowly. Even if I hadn't been looking
at it, I could tell where each and every scar lay.
Isaac
must have been watching me for I had not been pensive for long before
my weapon spoke to me.
“Wake
up, Johnny-Boy. It'll be alright.”
A
small smile tugged at the corner of my mouth, but I didn't have the
heart to let it grow fully.
Preliminary
mission failed, Isaac switched tactics.
“Hear
me, oh heroes!” the overhead light thundered. “Be ye of good
courage and faith!”
It
did the trick. I laughed, Drew laughed – even Cyril laughed. Alpha
Richards was the only one who jumped. With a scowl, he turned on the
troublemaker.
“Blast
you, Isaac! I'm never going to get used to that!”
Isaac
only spread his hands out in an innocent gesture. “Why accuse me?
It's not my fault that the light has words of wisdom to impart on
us!”
Alpha
muttered something under his breath, but resolutely turned back to
his weapons stash. Already, he'd put together a number of grenades
that we'd be using during the mission. The vigorous training in using
those and other explosives were now second nature to my fingers, but
I still hated using them if I could help it. For a reason I could not
explain, any mention of something exploding set my heart racing and
my stomach hurting.
Even
now, looking back to my small firearm, the only firearm the team
liked to entrust to me, I still could not feel comfort. This gun had
saved my life before, and I was certain it would save me again.
I
hadn't noticed Drew walking over to me until his hand was on my
shoulder. “Jonathan, are you okay? This is going to be the same as
every other mission. Don't worry about it.”
I
could only stare at the gun. “Am I doing the right thing?”
Drew
cocked his head. “What do you mean?” He kept his voice low so
that we wouldn't have to share the conversation with the rest of the
men in the room.
“This.”
I shook the gun a little, to emphasize my point.
Drew
nodded. I didn't have to say much to make him understand – he was a
homeschooler, after all. Perhaps the skill of quick understanding was
part of their basic cirriculum. “We're not using these for fun,
Jonathan,” he said. “We're using them to save people.”
“But
at the expense of killing others?” I turned to him.
Drew's
hazel eyes were steady. “Every one of the men and women coming
against us knows what they fight for. They've made their choice.
Nothing we can do will reverse that.”
I
knew that, but somehow hearing it out loud made the argument seem
lessened in my mind. My eyes fell back onto the gun. I had rubbed it
so cleanly that I could now see part of my reflection in the side.
“What would David have done?”
“What
would Jesus have done?” Drew countered softly. “Jonathan, He died
for those people we're trying to save. Some of them don't know how
much He loves them. Shouldn't we give all to give them a second
chance? Shouldn't we risk our lives to give them hope and a promise?”
“I
don't regret that.”
“I
didn't think you did.” He jostled my elbow. “This team was your
idea anyway.”
{QQ Inspiration} |
I
continued to stare at my reflection. There was something haunting
about my eyes, the jagged scar from a previous mission stale on my
cheek, the skin pale from too much time underground.
“How
did we get mixed up in this, Drew?”
He
gave a wry grin. “God knew we needed to be a part of it.”
“But
we're just kids. We're not supposed to be heroes. Alpha, Cyril... the
others – they're all older. They know how to handle stuff like
this.”
“And
that's why we're not going out there alone, Jonathan.” Drew took
both of my shoulders in his hands and turned him to face me. “We
may be young, but God has gifted us with the talent to serve Him in
this way. You have proved yourself worthy of your spot on the David
Team again and again.”
“And
your brain has helped almost every part of this mission.”
Drew
shrugged. “I wouldn't say every part, but I like tinkering where I
can. The point is, we're here because God placed us here. I know it's
big and scary, but God knew we could handle it. I don't mean to sound
boastful, but even though we're not as old and as experienced as some
of the other members of the team, we can still make a huge impact.
God's using us to bring people to Him. It's awesome just to think
about, and I mean the awesome that just makes your mouth drop and
your mind melt in an inspired mush. God had this all planned. And I
couldn't ask for a better team than this.”
I
grasped his shoulder in return with my free hand. “And neither
could I.”
“Then
let's go save lives.”
Drew
hadn't spoken. Confused, we both dropped our gazes to stare at the
suddenly loquacious barrel of my gun.
Isaac
only grinned.
God bless!
P.S. This quote is actually from May's QQ, and I'm kinda late in posting, but better late than never, right? I'm looking forward to what Melody's planning for June's QQ!
P.S. This quote is actually from May's QQ, and I'm kinda late in posting, but better late than never, right? I'm looking forward to what Melody's planning for June's QQ!
I remember you talking about this plot idea last year! And I also remember getting ridiculously excited about it because it sounded BRILLIANT, and just all around awesome!
ReplyDeleteIt was so fun getting a peek into it. I'm sorry, Kiri, but you're just going to have to find something that stops time so you'll have more time to write all these books. Because I want ALL OF THEM.